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Always Elect Righteous

One chap loved the external grace; While the other loved the interior. One lass was only having vanity on her the heavenly beyond beauty. But the other was filled with calmness, holiness and love. Now, after nuptial. One couple is enjoying a life with a baby; While the other man's wife took to her heels with other very well-off man.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:28:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem,Abhijeet :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 6:35:00 AM

Abhijeet, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ggg Bbb

Date: 3/13/2016 5:26:00 AM

it can be ending for each of the two)