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Always Chasing the Sun

Though the streets have changed and the houses not quite the same...I can still feel the grey of chasing the sun on a rainy day...and tasting teardrops that have no way... The skyline has moved and what was in front of me then, wavers in my mind with little room to bend..Its like chasing the sun on a rainy day..and hearing words with little to say... Some faces are gone, some just wear life like a hat. The voices still strong and not an eye to bat...Still its like chasing the sun on a rainy day.. and holding kisses that want so much to stay.. My eyes see a painting that's still not done, some colors washed in and a few on the run.. That's why I'm always chasing the sun on a rainy day... and keeping foldaway dreams that can never run or stray...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 8:46:00 PM
Oh what a wonderful read. Goes straight to my favorites.
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Date: 2/24/2011 10:56:00 AM
This reminds me of the nostalgia and melancholy of my forgotten forest. I love your analogies.
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:56:00 PM
"foldaway dreams" quite captivating.. Pondering write MJF.. love W
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:04:00 AM
As much as things change they remain the same my w.K. of P.S. and these words ring true perfection of thoughts and feelings.. u will never change but remain as sweet as u are my friend with poetic luv... chasing the sun till we catch it luv.. Jersey Girl luvs this one..
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:59:00 AM
"keeping foldaway dreams" I love this line, that is such a good thought, loved your poem~~
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:07:00 PM
gosh, what an uplifting and positive way to think and brilliantly supported by that repeating line "chasing the sun on a rainy day" This is awesome!
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Date: 2/17/2011 3:10:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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