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Since our first rendezvous, one of many, Our love has grown beyond the scope of chance, No constraints to withhold, no boundary, Free to our passion, limitless romance. At our timely hour, we will promptly meet, And do what romance novels are made of, Live out our chapters and verses so sweet, Our life an open book, tales of our love. We will invest ourselves, time and again, Our future we hold in our arms embrace, Wedding rings exchanged, affections remain, Our future ahead, together we face. We smile and we laugh, as our family grows, Our love etched in stone, everybody knows. 2020 January 30 A sonnet true love Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri Howmanysyllables; 14 lines x 10 syllables per = 140 syllables total

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Date: 2/20/2020 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, William. A life of togetherness and commitment. Hugs Eve
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/21/2020 12:15:00 AM
Eternal bliss begins, Thanks, Eve -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/20/2020 9:43:00 AM
Your sonnet is so wonderfully romantic William. Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
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Date: 2/20/2020 10:52:00 AM
Mahalo nui loa, Connie! Me ke aloha pumehana!~@wk
Date: 2/20/2020 8:41:00 AM
Hi William, Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Enjoy the rest your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/20/2020 10:50:00 AM
Most kind of you to say, Alexis, likewise to your day enjoyed -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 2/20/2020 3:33:00 AM
Aha a winner in my book I loved it!:)
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Date: 2/20/2020 3:37:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda, -- Aloha!~@wk
Date: 1/30/2020 2:40:00 PM
Hello William Kekaula, this poem is romantic. Lovely. Aloha! darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/15/2020 1:32:00 PM
Aloha! William, your friend. Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/30/2020 5:15:00 PM
Hell William, yes this poem is romantic.Have a nice evening my friend. Aloha! Darlene.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/30/2020 3:21:00 PM
Kind of you to say, Darlene, Aloha!~@wk

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