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Alternative Studies

Outside the classroom
Sun and cloud dapple the vale
Thrush rehearses triple phrase

The while overhead
Lark ascends in descant stream
Studies the Elysian scene


2 May 2019

Contest: Bite sized poem No.4

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Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2019 at 6:22 PM

this is so beautiful. Love it. Congrats on the winner list.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 10, 2019 at 1:12 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Geoffery :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Swetha Vangaveti

May 8, 2019 at 10:09 PM

Nature is a great teacher and so is poetry. There are many things to learn outside the four walls of the classroom. That's where the real learning starts. Great write and your poem has triggered a new thought in me. Thanks for that Geoffrey. :)

Geoffrey Brewer

May 8, 2019 at 10:31 PM

I agree with your observations, and am gratified to have triggered a thought in you. Thanks for your comments, Sweetha.

P.S. Awtry

May 6, 2019 at 12:02 PM

so much learning going on in your poem--outside the classroom! The birds you've mentioned and their observer. And the poor lad of my imagination trapped in a desk looking wistfully out the window wanting a Tom Sawyer adventure in the great outdoors. Enjoyed :)

Geoffrey Brewer

May 6, 2019 at 8:23 PM

Thank you for your sensitive and imaginative comments. Much appreciated, P.S.

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