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Alternative Studies

Outside the classroom Sun and cloud dapple the vale Thrush rehearses triple phrase The while overhead Lark ascends in descant stream Studies the Elysian scene 2 May 2019 Contest: Bite sized poem No.4

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2019 6:22:00 PM

this is so beautiful. Love it. Congrats on the winner list.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2019 1:12:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Geoffery :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/8/2019 10:09:00 PM

Nature is a great teacher and so is poetry. There are many things to learn outside the four walls of the classroom. That's where the real learning starts. Great write and your poem has triggered a new thought in me. Thanks for that Geoffrey. :)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/8/2019 10:31:00 PM

I agree with your observations, and am gratified to have triggered a thought in you. Thanks for your comments, Sweetha.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 5/6/2019 12:02:00 PM

so much learning going on in your poem--outside the classroom! The birds you've mentioned and their observer. And the poor lad of my imagination trapped in a desk looking wistfully out the window wanting a Tom Sawyer adventure in the great outdoors. Enjoyed :)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 5/6/2019 8:23:00 PM

Thank you for your sensitive and imaginative comments. Much appreciated, P.S.