Notes About The Poem

originally posted as a haiku

Altered State

clouds
of
incense~
inhaling
exotic
dreams



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Another "fav"; love the idea.
Gauthier Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 1:55 AM
It is amazing what incense can do. Weirdly I began smelling it as I read.
Gauthier Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 12:24 AM
Very Zen my friend. I love it. xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
December 14, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Connie.
Buehler Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 8:45 PM
Nicely done, Line, and pure joy to read! :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 11:14 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Evelyn.
Na Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 5:07 PM
well written :) Lin
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thanks, Gregory.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Meditative prayer so aromatic, as this transcendent poem holistically reveal. Superb write, Line! An instant fave for sure. Love and best wishes for the holidays.
Gauthier Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 8:19 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and compliment, Freddie.
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