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originally posted as a haiku

clouds of incense~ inhaling exotic dreams AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on December 13, 2019

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Date: 12/20/2019 12:03:00 PM
Another "fav"; love the idea.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/20/2019 12:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/19/2019 1:55:00 AM
It is amazing what incense can do. Weirdly I began smelling it as I read.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/19/2019 8:41:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 12/14/2019 12:24:00 AM
Very Zen my friend. I love it. xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/14/2019 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Connie.
Date: 12/13/2019 8:45:00 PM
Nicely done, Line, and pure joy to read! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2019 11:14:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Evelyn.
Date: 12/13/2019 5:07:00 PM
well written :) Lin
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory.
Date: 12/13/2019 4:51:00 PM
Meditative prayer so aromatic, as this transcendent poem holistically reveal. Superb write, Line! An instant fave for sure. Love and best wishes for the holidays.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/13/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely visit and compliment, Freddie.

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