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Altered Driving

The long, sleepless hours, massive caffeine intake mixed emotions wreak havoc on the nerves shadows jump out from corners merge up beside on the freeway cause the car to jerk to the left or right inside the voice of evil laughs, taunts and teases a reminder of some discarded family member left behind long ago for good reason he wishes this one would leave out from behind his conscience where it hides and schemes wishes that the drive could be made easier nights longer and dreams a thousand times more restful knows that if he closes his eyes again that may happen for real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/16/2011 11:01:00 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix. Thank you so much for sharing Jack. Love, Carol
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