Altered Driving

The long, sleepless hours, 
massive caffeine intake
mixed emotions wreak havoc 
on the nerves

shadows jump out from corners
merge up beside on the freeway
cause the car to jerk to the left or right

inside the voice of evil laughs, taunts and teases
a reminder of some discarded family member 
left behind long ago
for good reason

he wishes this one would leave 
out from behind his conscience
where it hides and schemes

wishes that the drive
could be made easier 
nights longer
and dreams a thousand times more restful

knows that if he closes his eyes again
that may happen 
for real.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 16, 2011 at 11:01 AM
I am so thrilled by the poetry I am reading this morning. Looks like everyone has found a pipeline to inspiration. This is wonderful and I am so happy your poetry is right here in this mix. Thank you so much for sharing Jack. Love, Carol
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