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Also saw you standing there Without your worries or your cares Love ya lots but got these thoughts And I know all our experiences are not for naught Got these thoughts of the thrill Over yonder... of a lovely frill But I also saw you standing there Without your worries or your cares Wine in hand and I understand Like a ferocious rainstorm our greenery stood good As your open mouth gaped these words did escape "Love ya also" and the way we're taking shape And of love covered in cherry chocolate hues Amongst the sky as sure as apple pie blues !

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Date: 9/6/2010 12:30:00 AM
Nice work Susan especially like the images of the last couplet.Rgds Brian
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