Also

Also saw you standing there
Without your worries or your cares

Love ya lots but got these thoughts
And I know all our experiences are not for naught

Got these thoughts of the thrill
Over yonder... of a lovely frill

But I also saw you standing there
Without your worries or your cares

Wine in hand and I understand
Like a ferocious rainstorm our greenery stood good

As your open mouth gaped these words did escape
"Love ya also" and the way we're taking shape

And of love covered in cherry chocolate hues
Amongst the sky as sure as apple pie blues !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 6, 2010 at 12:30 AM
Nice work Susan especially like the images of the last couplet.Rgds Brian
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