Alrights Were Wrong

life fades to black life fades to white
I hope to god youll be alright.

day turns to night night turns to day,
Im trying to make things okay.

truth is false and lies are true,
this is my goodbye to you.

good enough is good as gone,
now i know 'alrights' were wrong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 8:48 PM
I hope you're okay.. I've been periodically checking waiting for another poem to show up... It's upsetting that it's not a happy one...
Wesley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:43 PM
Clever Chelsea, I always appreciate the way words can twist into the most amazing meaning. Great job.
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