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Five fingers on a hand that I have touched Each digit loved; hint soft lust, by my hand... Eyes wanted, but hands took those small full lips and guided them to a mouth so hungry Will keep strength I cannot hide my sad need Of someone that is already taken...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/9/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Jared’s’s contest, you are such a creative poet. Please keep your creative caps on and let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with paints of passion. Enjoy the honor as I wish you many more. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:59:00 PM
Great win, Jessica. Great poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 4:02:00 PM
Wow, Jessica!...This is a sad and beautiful use of this form...really hits home to me! VERY difficult form but you did it right!...Congratulations on your win! - Tim
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:23:00 AM
congratulatins on your win in the contest, enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Harry
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations Jessica on your win in Jared Picket's contest "Tetractys". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:35:00 AM
Great job with this one! Congrats on your 1st place win! Dan C
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:33:00 PM
congrats on win with this lovely entry
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:27:00 PM
Congrtatulations, Jessica on first place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:22:00 PM
What a touching tetractys, Jessica :) Congrats on your first place win :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:29:00 PM
Congrats on the first place win, Jessica
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:11:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your fist place win with Chris and me in Jared's contest.. awesome victory my friend.. we are the Three Poeteers tonight.. enjoy..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:41:00 PM
Ahh...so bittersweet, and lovingly said. Well done! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/31/2010 8:08:00 PM
Excellent choice for your Tetractys.... Well written and thought provoking... Good work and good luck.....:JP]
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Date: 7/31/2010 12:31:00 AM
awww... this is frustrating. nicely written! thanks for the comment =) Lizann
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