Alphabet Haiku - Tough Trees Tremble

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ true terror... trashing... tortured... tricked... teased... terrorised tough trees tremble too ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Modern haiku form created by Beatrice Evans, aka Ronnica at Allpoetry It requires only strict 5 7 5 syllable construction with all words beginning with the same letter
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March 1, 2018 at 7:05 PM
alliteration at its best in brevity. The repetition here did not sound monotonous as some does. Not familiar with this kind of haiku; but I really like the piece and the point you make. I'm connecting this with the peer pressure that teenagers put other teenagers through.
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March 3, 2018 at 3:41 AM
Reason, It all adds up, peer pressure, all sorts, just believe in yourself and do it... Regards Mick
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