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Aloof

I Spin like the last planet in the universe A most distant object detached from existence tucked away from the world of words removed from respect or values insensitive to all human beliefs My indifference is unprejudiced not right or wrong not excessive nor defective more a pitiless apathy For I am 'Aloof' A brand new breed residing in a stone-cold callous environment billions of light years from ridiculous emotions You may scream your expressions with a flair it worries me not if you glare I have no intention to share because I simply don't care For I am 'Aloof' too removed to bother too remote to compare Your arguments will fall on a deaf ear it does not matter if you are sincere For in my 'Aloof' atmosphere I don't care. I don't care! I don't care?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/20/2009 5:23:00 PM
excellent..if you care? You might like A Fool and His Life are Soon Parted...Light & Love
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:27:00 PM
Jack ... your poem speaks volumes ... great play on words ... great message... keep those verses coming..
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:45:00 PM
Beautiful! I shuttered, I really loved that piece.
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