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Along with the thunder

As the smiles in the cloud brighten, a cloudburst of joy sends gentle kisses on our rooftops, pouring down clouded tears— bottled-up emotions to quench the thirsts of humans, plants, animals... and phantoms. The trees— with feet rooted deep in earth— stood humble as a worm. The birds~ wings shyly folded to drain the rain— could not dry-clean the leak in their nests. Each drop of the rain carried the smell of the earth, as runoffs calmed the fury of a beast threatening to devour the landscape— along with the thunder. Then twilight knocks— the stream of tears halts mid-flow, the music stops, as rain pulls up the curb; dry rain clutches the biting wind... to remind us: it's winter not summer.

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Date: 5/19/2025 4:42:00 AM
Very descriptive work you have penned. We've had some violent storms in the USA this past week and over the course of spring. Sad when so many people are hurting. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/19/2025 6:38:00 AM
Thanks as always Sara.

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