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"Grandpa" Etgen, 1920

ALONG THE WOODED EDGE

I reach the wooded edge  
in the held breath before sunrise,  
October coolness at my back.

I walk eastward, lifting my gaze
expecting blue light~  
but dawn arrives golden and warm,  
a quiet mercy on my chilled skin.

The wind carries earth, water, and pine.  
Then a rustle.  I stop.  I listen.

My ancestors walk behind me.  
“Be still,” they whisper.  
“You are the result of the love of thousands before you.”
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July 25, 2026 at 9:49 PM
wow, what an ending, Sara :)
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