Along the Planks of Destiny

In dreadful hours of tatterred spires and bones ,
The same ballroom rhapsody is calling me
Where he and I grasped serendipity as lovesick travelers
Above and around the pewter of an endless sea.

Walking along the deck to breathe the mist of stars
Our twin-like aspirations drew so many familiar sides ,
Where unchained secrets roamed with the floating liner
Above and around charmed flaps of Atlantic’s rides.

Then, a glacier blast tugged my drowsy body in Carpathia
Recalling how he kissed the moon upon my hand,
I heard him shout,” be brave ; we will meet again”;
Above and beyond flotsams of bloodied bags of sand

Glimpses of pounding floors rile, a scene set in darkness
Where howling fingers of voyagers devoured the gloom,
As he raced against the acrid swell of mid-April’s breath
Above and below, an awful sound of ocean's deep tomb

Within the heart of me, I pray he is alive and safe
For what we shared in contours of nights shall always be,
A longing so timeless ; I wait in hope like a stray ocean crest
Above and down, and up the planks of uncertain destiny






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* Carpathia ---the ship which responded
 to Titanic's emergency calls


Tracie Edwards’ My Heart Will Go On and On
By nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 14, 2012 at 4:48 PM
hi, this is awesome,,, xox~pd
Sweetheart Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM
congrats Nedttr luv on a magnificent write and win for the Titanic theme.. so wonderfully penned and photo to compliment the feelings..
Williams Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Nette, congrats on your win, liked this a lot..David
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April 11, 2012 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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April 11, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Congratulations on your win nette, love this xx
Horne Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 9:26 AM
what a beautiful write, nette. congrats on your wins
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April 1, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Beautifully presented and a wonderful entry for Tracie's contest, nette. And thanks for the congrats.
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March 31, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Interesting work that has winner written upon it..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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March 31, 2012 at 4:58 PM
This is such a dramatic write about the Titanic! I thought this poem to be wonderful and quite descriptive of a situation that could have occurred during this time period! I really enjoyed you write that I have read this evening! I thoroughly loved your poem tons! Great Work!!
Campi Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 3:47 PM
What a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing and thanks for reading my poem. Samuel Short was a bit silly, but it worked.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 12:28 PM
absolutely mesmerizing .. captivating lines mesh with photo.. something I still cannot do here on PS..oh... a gorgeous pice good luck.. a definite top winner my friend.. glad your check up was good ..mine was too biut I got bit by a spider two days ago so now on strong meds for that..oh.. perils of Linda-Marie..ha.ha..
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