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Along the Planks of Destiny

In dreadful hours of tatterred spires and bones , The same ballroom rhapsody is calling me Where he and I grasped serendipity as lovesick travelers Above and around the pewter of an endless sea. Walking along the deck to breathe the mist of stars Our twin-like aspirations drew so many familiar sides , Where unchained secrets roamed with the floating liner Above and around charmed flaps of Atlantic’s rides. Then, a glacier blast tugged my drowsy body in Carpathia Recalling how he kissed the moon upon my hand, I heard him shout,” be brave ; we will meet again”; Above and beyond flotsams of bloodied bags of sand Glimpses of pounding floors rile, a scene set in darkness Where howling fingers of voyagers devoured the gloom, As he raced against the acrid swell of mid-April’s breath Above and below, an awful sound of ocean's deep tomb Within the heart of me, I pray he is alive and safe For what we shared in contours of nights shall always be, A longing so timeless ; I wait in hope like a stray ocean crest Above and down, and up the planks of uncertain destiny © * Carpathia ---the ship which responded to Titanic's emergency calls Tracie Edwards’ My Heart Will Go On and On By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/14/2012 4:48:00 PM
hi, this is awesome,,, xox~pd
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:59:00 PM
congrats Nedttr luv on a magnificent write and win for the Titanic theme.. so wonderfully penned and photo to compliment the feelings..
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Date: 4/11/2012 10:30:00 AM
Nette, congrats on your win, liked this a lot..David
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win nette, love this xx
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Date: 4/1/2012 9:26:00 AM
what a beautiful write, nette. congrats on your wins
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Date: 4/1/2012 8:36:00 AM
Beautifully presented and a wonderful entry for Tracie's contest, nette. And thanks for the congrats.
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Date: 3/31/2012 6:22:00 PM
Interesting work that has winner written upon it..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/31/2012 4:58:00 PM
This is such a dramatic write about the Titanic! I thought this poem to be wonderful and quite descriptive of a situation that could have occurred during this time period! I really enjoyed you write that I have read this evening! I thoroughly loved your poem tons! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/31/2012 3:47:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing and thanks for reading my poem. Samuel Short was a bit silly, but it worked.
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:28:00 PM
absolutely mesmerizing .. captivating lines mesh with photo.. something I still cannot do here on PS..oh... a gorgeous pice good luck.. a definite top winner my friend.. glad your check up was good ..mine was too biut I got bit by a spider two days ago so now on strong meds for that..oh.. perils of Linda-Marie..ha.ha..
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