Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

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Along the Lake Shoreline

*Inspired by the photo from the internet


Through blades of grass, sun's centerpiece
Shines brighter, watching light increase
Thoughts get sharper, mind is more clear
With globe in my hands, all is near
Still reflections, enough to walk
With words of truth, now I can talk
Along this peaceful lake shoreline
There's no-one here, the world is mine

Heidi Sands

2/25/22

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Timothy Mcguire March 1, 2022 at 12:05 AM A very peaceful read, I enjoyed it greatly! Heidi Sands March 1, 2022 at 5:38 AM Thank you Timothy. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 25, 2022 at 12:31 PM Hello Heidi,This is how i feel when i am around the water. Peaceful. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2022 at 7:31 AM Which means they have to say home longer. It is a good thing they had all of their shots. Hugs Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2022 at 7:30 AM My Goddaughter can not work, |she is a nurse in a nursing home.\My oldest nephew has a job and can not work now the middle oldest can not go to school. All becaus my youngest played hocky and gor the virus form onr of the players. Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2022 at 7:28 AM Heidi my Goddaughter and i celebrate the same birthday. She felt badly because she could not be with me. I know we will have a birthday celebration next birthday. They all had their shots. ns they have to stay home longer. This is hard on my oldest nephew because he works noe. it is hard on all of them. Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2022 at 7:25 AM Hello Heidi, since i can not be by the water, i do have water scenes hung in my bedroom. I stare at them often. My goddaughter's sons has covid. It started with the youngest son, then the middle oldest got it and then the first born gotit. Heidi Sands February 25, 2022 at 1:25 PM Me too. Thank you Darlene. I hope all is well. Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit February 25, 2022 at 11:22 AM The photo is beautiful and so is your poem, Heidi. Enjoyed the neighborhood of the peaceful lake. The world is yours! Heidi Sands February 25, 2022 at 11:24 AM Thank you Vijay. Happy Friday :)

Kim Rodrigues February 25, 2022 at 10:40 AM Very pretty, Heidi! Heidi Sands February 25, 2022 at 10:45 AM Thank you Kim :)

John Read February 25, 2022 at 10:34 AM Hi Heidi, your poem gave life to the picture. Heidi Sands February 25, 2022 at 10:36 AM Thank you John. Nice to hear that :)

Alexis Y. February 25, 2022 at 10:03 AM Hi Heidi, It's a pleasure to your this fine morning. I enjoyed the peaceful tone of your well written. The photo inspired you to write a good verse. You described it spot on. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis Heidi Sands February 25, 2022 at 10:06 AM Thank you Alexis. I hope your day is going well :)