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Along Came a Hairy Spider

Eight legged hairy spider We can see it everywhere It can’t fly but with a long and sticky web Insects will stuck and grab it with speed On one moonless starry night The shadow of a spider is in sight Combined with color orange and black On top of the giant leaves ready to attack On its throne between two trees Lies a perfect web for flying insects A home for a king with fangs so big Perfect position for grabbing flies on twigs June 7, 2013 8Th Place Winner For Suz-D Contest

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Date: 7/2/2013 11:39:00 PM
glad to finally see this one and also to see you won in the contest Big congrats to you, sweetie.
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Date: 6/29/2013 10:28:00 PM
Maria, wonderful spider poem, congratulations.
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Date: 6/24/2013 1:39:00 PM
Creative and descriptive winning work..Conrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2013 7:28:00 AM
congrats on your win ;}
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Date: 6/22/2013 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Maria. Thanks for your visits and comments! David
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Date: 6/20/2013 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/9/2013 3:19:00 AM
Spider sometimes are annoying but on the other hand, they're also very helpful to us. A very beautiful poem about the spider my dear friend Maria. Good luck again in the contest my very dear friend! love much, Leonora
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Date: 6/7/2013 10:46:00 AM
Was it wrong of me that my hair stood up a little as I read this? This was a very enjoyable piece. But, I feel the need to stand up & get some fresh air now. lol
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Date: 6/8/2013 6:18:00 AM
thanks for dropping by friend Drakes.. :) so how do you feel right now? (^___^) i like spiders if it small, if big.. I'm afraid. Good day

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