Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Along Came a Hairy Spider

Eight legged hairy spider
We can see it everywhere
It can’t fly but with a long and sticky web
Insects will stuck and grab it with speed

On one moonless starry night
The shadow of a spider is in sight
Combined with color orange and black
On top of the giant leaves ready to attack

On its throne between two trees
Lies a perfect web for flying insects
A home for a king with fangs so big
Perfect position for grabbing flies on twigs



June 7, 2013
8Th Place Winner
For Suz-D Contest

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Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2013 at 11:39 PM glad to finally see this one and also to see you won in the contest Big congrats to you, sweetie.

Sheri Fresonke Harper June 29, 2013 at 10:28 PM Maria, wonderful spider poem, congratulations.

Sara Kendrick June 24, 2013 at 1:39 PM Creative and descriptive winning work..Conrats on your win..Sara

Debbie Duncan June 23, 2013 at 7:28 AM congrats on your win ;}

David De La Croes June 22, 2013 at 12:36 PM Congratulations, Maria. Thanks for your visits and comments! David

Joyce Johnson June 20, 2013 at 5:05 PM Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Len Gasun June 9, 2013 at 3:19 AM Spider sometimes are annoying but on the other hand, they're also very helpful to us. A very beautiful poem about the spider my dear friend Maria. Good luck again in the contest my very dear friend! love much, Leonora

Poet Tacito June 7, 2013 at 10:46 AM Was it wrong of me that my hair stood up a little as I read this? This was a very enjoyable piece. But, I feel the need to stand up & get some fresh air now. lol Bukang Liwayway June 8, 2013 at 6:18 AM thanks for dropping by friend Drakes.. :) so how do you feel right now? (^___^) i like spiders if it small, if big.. I'm afraid. Good day