Alone With You

I can hear you sigh
As you rustle the sheets,
Lost in a dream.
Sleep is evading me
So I lay 
With you
And look through my window
Not at the obsidian lake
Nor the candlelit roses
But at the luminescent moon
Beautiful in its solitude.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/26/2017 6:34:00 AM
An absolutely beautiful and enchanting poem. This evening sky is often the best solitude on a sleepless night.
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Iris Blade
Date: 4/26/2017 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much! I've always loved the night sky. I have noticed that it often reflects my mood and in that moment, I appeared to be the moon.
Date: 4/26/2017 3:26:00 AM
Such poetic words. I can relate to this well, I'm often awake as my lovely husband sleeps. The moon and starlight makes the solitude so magical. This certainly deserves a seven Iris
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Iris Blade
Date: 4/26/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, I am honored. I often stay up to write and the moon captures my imagination. I write my best poems alone with only the stars to keep me company.
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