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Alone With You

I can hear you sigh As you rustle the sheets, Lost in a dream. Sleep is evading me So I lay With you And look through my window Not at the obsidian lake Nor the candlelit roses But at the luminescent moon Beautiful in its solitude.

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Chris Green

Date: 4/26/2017 6:34:00 AM

An absolutely beautiful and enchanting poem. This evening sky is often the best solitude on a sleepless night.

Iris Blade
Date: 4/26/2017 10:39:00 AM

Thank you so much! I've always loved the night sky. I have noticed that it often reflects my mood and in that moment, I appeared to be the moon.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/26/2017 3:26:00 AM

Such poetic words. I can relate to this well, I'm often awake as my lovely husband sleeps. The moon and starlight makes the solitude so magical. This certainly deserves a seven Iris

Iris Blade
Date: 4/26/2017 10:50:00 AM

Thank you, I am honored. I often stay up to write and the moon captures my imagination. I write my best poems alone with only the stars to keep me company.