Alone With the Phone

Once I was alone She never called on the phone I was impatient But I waited all night then Into morning's dawn awesome

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/30/2022 3:50:00 PM

We are never really alone when nature is always there to accompany us... A most interesting poem this was to read. Loved the awesome imagery in it!

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/5/2023 6:00:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Kelly and thank you for the Insight. I will stop by you in the future. VB Rogers Black panther

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/30/2022 3:32:00 AM

Glad you witnessed the dawn, an unexpected gift, nice poem :)

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/5/2023 6:07:00 PM

Thanks again Mystic Rose Rose i enjoy your Input. Looking forward to reading yours also. VB Rogers Black panther