Alone With the Moon

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I'm alone with the moon tonight!

          Truly a divine heavenly body!
      A shape-shifting marvel to behold.
  As a waxing crescent, dazzlingly radiant
             And at her happiest;
      So inviting, her beaming smile.

            She steals the twilight sky
    Generously gemmed with bright stars.
        I came out to gaze at the stars
    Instead, I fell under the moon's spell
             Like a lone wolf seduced.

          Oh, how she owns the night!
        Her silver globe floats like hope
      Overhead, shining ever so brightly.
        A sad lonely moon now smiling;
             Grateful for my company.

          The charcoal sky is littered
              With millions of stars,
         But she shines the brightest.
             Her captivating beauty
                   Ensorcelling me.

    So shy, she never shows humanity
  The other side of her face. Oftentimes,
    Hiding behind a dark bank of clouds;
    Sinking herself towards the horizon,
   Yet her charm remains undiminished.

 A most sublime rendezvous! She tugs at
My sleeve to stay with her the whole night,
        Lest her smile turns to a frown.
          Goodnight, beauteous moon.
  I won't be a stranger, poor lonely thing.

      I'm alone with the moon tonight!


Date written: 08/04/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/5/2021 6:00:00 AM
I enjoyed this Edward. Well done :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/5/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi:-) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 8/4/2021 6:41:00 PM
This is beautiful. I love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/4/2021 9:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Regina:-)
Date: 8/4/2021 3:48:00 PM
The moon has inspired so many people throughout the centuries. Nice poem. Best wishes for the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/4/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, W.A.:-)
Date: 8/4/2021 3:46:00 PM
Great imagery of moon --eloquently garbed in human feelings. All the best, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/4/2021 3:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
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