Alone With Me

Alone with ears too wise to hear
And eyes to blind to see 
Dear Lord Jesus, please don’t leave
Myself alone with me

In darkness vengeance steals my thoughts
And rolls within my head
I taste the words I long to say
Words better left unsaid

My twisting, turning, twiddling thumbs
Will not be bored for long
Bad habits jump into my hands
Where soon they will grow strong

 My feet will run to Trouble’s door 
And beg to come inside
Where they will roam forbidden halls
Built up by foolish pride

Lord, please stay beside me now
God hear my humble plea
I’m formed of dust, and just can’t trust
Myself, alone with me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Onate Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 11:51 AM
great rite the first lines are my favorite ones sometimes we can see better in the darkness lovely rite!!!!!!
Eckiwaudah Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 3:13 PM
i loved it. its awesome.
Lopez Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 8:08 AM
i too wrestle often . this is a great write that i relate to. the rhyming flow is absolutly awsome! great J.O.B.
Smalling Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:58 AM
What a beautiful poem of faith and prayer. I have been praying all night myself. blessings from above and love, you inspire me.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 10:21 AM
Excellent flow and rhyming Anna! Your opening and closing verses are bookends to a wonderfully articulated poem. As close to a masterpiece as there is... Best wishes, Keith
Moreno Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 10:28 AM
Another fascinating piece you have here. You have a well developed skill. You are meant for this craft. Thank you for your wonderful comments...Raul
Neal Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 9:34 AM
That is an excellent poem Anna. You have a beautiful style. God has blessed you with a lovely gift. Thanks for sharing it with the world...Love Elizabeth
Garg Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 7:30 AM
What a write with true emotions. You must have a great mind to write like this. It is a lovely write and I do envy you for it.
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