Alone With Her Thoughts

Alone with her thoughts Desires of him, self capture ~~~ Internal raptures http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-10.php
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Cole Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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Spence Sr Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 9:08 AM
This is an excellent senryu. The last two lines are right on point. Great job! Joseph
Hales Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:29 AM
Love !!!!! and desires my fav !!! sarah x
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:31 AM
I love the first line James.. Intrigues me to think what she was thinking at her deepest.. great senryu///C
Mehta Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 5:25 PM
A wonderful perfect haiku. Self capture/internal raptures very apt images
Haick Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Oooh! I like this..sounds familiar, Highlander! Great Senryu! Peace, love, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Nice one...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Falotico Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 3:32 PM
LOVE THIS!!! wonderful write
Tideswell Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 2:35 PM
'Alone with her thoughts' - super senryu James, love it!! ~ Sharon :)
Segal Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 2:18 PM
You should'nt talk about me on the soup!! LOL Great write! love Simone
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