Alone - Solitude and Loneliness

Alone - Solitude and Loneliness


Solitude
is a state of mind
being solid as a rock
taking a walk in a country park
on a Sunday afternoon
alone, 
deep in the forest but not lonely 
in touch with the moment
reflecting, replenishing
being self aware
Solitude is something you choose

	The sun fades into the darkness of night
	the sky is clear and the full moon shines bright
	in the distance the lone wolf howls at the moon while 
	the solitary owl perched high up in a tree
	patiently waiting for it’s prey to appear
	

Loneliness
is a state of mind
being vulnerable as a child 
taking a walk on a busy city street 
on a Saturday afternoon
alone,
lonely in a crowd-full of people
not being aware of the moment 
isolation, estrangement
an exaggerated awareness of being alone
Loneliness is imposed on you by others

	The night give it’s place to the day 
	the sky is clear but the morning fog hides the sun
	in the distance a lone dog howls for some unknown reason
	in the park, a pigeon sits on the highest statue
	waiting for someone to appear

Paul E Mazerolle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 1:03 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Krotkiy Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Paul, awesome poem! I am a songwriter. Do you mind if I use "Alone" for a song?
Mazeropa Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Fedor Korotchenko I am pleased with your request. Yes you have my permission to use my text Paul E Mazerolle
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December 20, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Paula, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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December 12, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Paul, I really like this one. Well done!
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