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Drowning in Self-inflicted Sorrow Arts numériques par Barry Farley Visual Arts | Artmajeur

ALONE IN WORDS I cower from the rumbling squall of loneliness and shrink from the shards of misdirected words. The mantle of hope escapes my ambitions, forever silencing my courage. I am drowning in discontent. From Brainstorm 10/16/2018 For Divisa 4 Poetry Contest 02/25/2021

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Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 5/17/2021 10:12:00 PM

Very powerful write this dear poet, and congrats for your well deserving win

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 4/29/2021 7:50:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win Charlie. I hope you are doing well. Stay strong, stay happy

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/13/2021 9:02:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda, I am working on the strength but am happy and well...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/21/2021 3:49:00 PM

Hello Charlie Smith, How are you doing? I hope all is well with you. We all have discontent. followed by a loneliness, Enjoy your evening my friend.

Thomas Wells

Date: 4/21/2021 3:13:00 PM

Charlie, I feel a stark tragedy, clarity, and simplicity from your poem. It is an expression with which I readily relate. Thank you!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/13/2021 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Thomas...

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/17/2021 12:16:00 PM

Penetrating words, well witten. Congratulations!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/13/2021 8:58:00 AM

Thank you Jukiet...

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/16/2021 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Charlie. Your words are poignant comrades and colleagues.

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/13/2021 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Sam...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/16/2021 9:37:00 AM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Charlie. Janice

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/13/2021 8:57:00 AM

thank you Janice...

Kenisha Shines

Date: 3/30/2021 7:29:00 AM

Powerful and beautifully written.Hope everything is fine .Take care and god bless!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/1/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Kenisha, all is well...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2021 3:44:00 PM

You chose a great excerpt from your poem. I really like this, Charlie.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/22/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2021 12:20:00 PM

- I think there are many people who "drowning in discontent" in this cruel time, Charlie - Hope everything is fine with you and your loved ones :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/22/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise...

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/7/2021 1:09:00 AM

It's a very powerful liness dear friend Charlie. Although I would have appreciated it more, if you had not ended the poem with a note of discontent. Struggles and obstacles come not to make us weak but to make us more strong. My apologies that I missed your comment on my Poem on my poem Tribute on Mother's Day dt 14 th May 2019. Hope to see more soon on your page. With best wishes..Ravindra

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/7/2021 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Ravindra...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/28/2021 3:58:00 PM

Hello Charlie Smith, we all tent have discontent. Every one has it every now and then. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2021 9:54:00 AM

Thank You DARLENE...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/25/2021 11:54:00 AM

Very powerful depiction, Charlie--I hear the voices of discontent.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/7/2021 8:50:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...