Nivitha Ann Paul Poet Free verse

Alone In the Unknown Land

I am alone,in this unknown land
The way back as a losers game,I played
Wanna live it bravely but at times I fail....
Me who cries for the gone past,me myself call a pessimist

Past which teach me a lot
Life a teacher,teach me happily the sorrows...
Me jealous of those happy ones
Thinks its a curse alone for me or may the fate...

Still my goals are firm
I'm not ready to leave it for the past
But for the future
I am ready to fight for my life

Me not a selfish ! Still want something,not for me 
But to help the world,The ones who are alone..........

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Diwakar Pokhriyal June 10, 2011 at 12:53 AM Nice thought madam.....:)................nicely fought against lonliness........beautiful :)

John Freeman March 1, 2010 at 8:28 AM My contest results are posted, Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Agape, Moses

John Freeman February 28, 2010 at 8:39 AM Nivitha, thanks for supporting my contest with this poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick February 27, 2010 at 5:51 PM Nivitha, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire February 27, 2010 at 7:41 AM Life is indeed a great teacher, Nivitha. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 27, 2010 at 7:34 AM Congrats on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jay Loveless February 19, 2010 at 10:58 AM i love this. i really do. amazing write. xo rain

Joanna Smith February 18, 2010 at 11:00 AM this is a good poem and it says alot; life is hard and it takes alot to get through life and come out the same person you want to be. keep your goals firm and fight for your life! =)Jo

John Freeman January 22, 2010 at 11:03 AM I want to most graciously thank you for your support of my contest. Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown January 11, 2010 at 10:41 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Nivotha. Love,Carol

Edward Orozco September 28, 2009 at 12:40 AM Beautiful piece! Great job on this entry- ed

Neldy Jolo August 13, 2009 at 10:54 AM the most freedom that everybody can do in this world is to do good. i am touch..dont leave people alone...

L'Nass Shango April 16, 2009 at 12:30 PM Strangers see everything as beautiful, but also as lonely. One day you will have many friends, and your dreams will bear sweet fruit

Bryn Murphy April 4, 2009 at 8:42 AM nice poem i really enjoyed it and thank you for the comment on my poem you and i

Keith Bickerstaffe April 4, 2009 at 1:27 AM Nicely constructed and expressed... an ode to the selfless and the meek. Well done Nivitha! Best wishes, Keith

Ernilando Tugaff April 4, 2009 at 12:58 AM Welcome to the Soupland Nivitha. There is a wide room wating for you Thank you for your honest comment on my The Farmer. Ernilando

Aleera De La Keur April 4, 2009 at 12:33 AM Welcome to the soup, eloquently phrased, and thank you for the comment on my works in progress, lol. You have talent, keep us begging for more, hun....Aleera

Arany P. April 3, 2009 at 10:46 AM hey Nivitha, welcome to the PS! thank you and i love this write too... you have got a unique style... and your message is really cool! ~ Arany

Colin Mitchell Williams April 3, 2009 at 10:31 AM Hi Nivitha... there is something descriptively quirky in your style.... the flow in this poem is made more so by this individual style... really liked the brave affirmation ! Thank you for your comment on Death and Life