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Alone In the Unknown Land

I am alone,in this unknown land
The way back as a losers game,I played
Wanna live it bravely but at times I fail....
Me who cries for the gone past,me myself call a pessimist

Past which teach me a lot
Life a teacher,teach me happily the sorrows...
Me jealous of those happy ones
Thinks its a curse alone for me or may the fate...

Still my goals are firm
I'm not ready to leave it for the past
But for the future
I am ready to fight for my life

Me not a selfish ! Still want something,not for me 
But to help the world,The ones who are alone..........

Copyright © Nivitha Ann Paul | Year Posted 2009

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Diwakar Pokhriyal Date: 6/10/2011 12:53:00 AM Nice thought madam.....:)................nicely fought against lonliness........beautiful :) Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/1/2010 8:28:00 AM My contest results are posted, Thanks for stopping by and commenting. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 2/28/2010 8:39:00 AM Nivitha, thanks for supporting my contest with this poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/27/2010 5:51:00 PM Nivitha, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/27/2010 7:41:00 AM Life is indeed a great teacher, Nivitha. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/27/2010 7:34:00 AM Congrats on your winning poem and placement in Moses contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Jay Loveless Date: 2/19/2010 10:58:00 AM i love this. i really do. amazing write. xo rain Login to Reply

Joanna Smith Date: 2/18/2010 11:00:00 AM this is a good poem and it says alot; life is hard and it takes alot to get through life and come out the same person you want to be. keep your goals firm and fight for your life! =)Jo Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/22/2010 11:03:00 AM I want to most graciously thank you for your support of my contest. Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/11/2010 10:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Nivotha. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Edward Orozco Date: 9/28/2009 12:40:00 AM Beautiful piece! Great job on this entry- ed Login to Reply

Neldy Jolo Date: 8/13/2009 10:54:00 AM the most freedom that everybody can do in this world is to do good. i am touch..dont leave people alone... Login to Reply

L'Nass Shango Date: 4/16/2009 12:30:00 PM Strangers see everything as beautiful, but also as lonely. One day you will have many friends, and your dreams will bear sweet fruit Login to Reply

Bryn Murphy Date: 4/4/2009 8:42:00 AM nice poem i really enjoyed it and thank you for the comment on my poem you and i Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 4/4/2009 1:27:00 AM Nicely constructed and expressed... an ode to the selfless and the meek. Well done Nivitha! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Ernilando Tugaff Date: 4/4/2009 12:58:00 AM Welcome to the Soupland Nivitha. There is a wide room wating for you Thank you for your honest comment on my The Farmer. Ernilando Login to Reply

Aleera De La Keur Date: 4/4/2009 12:33:00 AM Welcome to the soup, eloquently phrased, and thank you for the comment on my works in progress, lol. You have talent, keep us begging for more, hun....Aleera Login to Reply

Arany P. Date: 4/3/2009 10:46:00 AM hey Nivitha, welcome to the PS! thank you and i love this write too... you have got a unique style... and your message is really cool! ~ Arany Login to Reply

Colin Mitchell Williams Date: 4/3/2009 10:31:00 AM Hi Nivitha... there is something descriptively quirky in your style.... the flow in this poem is made more so by this individual style... really liked the brave affirmation ! Thank you for your comment on Death and Life Login to Reply