Alone In My Mind

Have you ever cried?,
Felt your mind go loose 
As you lose sanity.
The people around you
Slowly shrinking until
They vanish into thin air

Silence screaming in your ears
Then solitary you find yourself
Glimpses of you being normal
Pazzling your mind like a math 
test.

An awkward silence after anther
You could berely tell who you 
are.

Have you ever felt a pain so 
deep?,
Your heart drowns in all the 
misery.
Anger consumes you
Then followed by a tantrum
That could last a life time.
All the good memories
Have been reduced to one 
sweet nightmare
Irradiating on what your life 
should have been.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 29, 2012 at 10:00 PM
Ronny, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
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July 26, 2012 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Ronny. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:53 AM
Ronny a belated congrats on your win..David
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July 25, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Intense... tho very interesting. Congratulations on the win.
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July 25, 2012 at 10:17 AM
Very dark and very well written poem dealing with emotions many of us can identify with, Ronnie...congratulations - Tim
Taylor Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Outstanding, Ronny. Congrats. Well deserved win. Kudos. Ralph
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July 25, 2012 at 7:26 AM
Congrats on your win Ronny
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July 25, 2012 at 1:54 AM
Very nice... congratulations on your win... Terry
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July 25, 2012 at 12:43 AM
Wonderful piece,Ronny.Good job.Congratulations on your win.
Irisha Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Very nice.
Kendrick Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 2:01 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by my work and reading..Sara
Cheesman Avatar
May 25, 2012 at 4:05 AM
Ronny you have a great way with emotion and you word it so sublime. Really good. Shaz
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May 24, 2012 at 2:53 PM
This is a very good poem that I enjoyed reading. We all have these nfeelings at one time or another. Thanks for shari ng. Lucilla
Caldwell Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 11:13 AM
iM UR NEW BIGGEST FAN
Madonsela Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 11:53 AM
thanx, hey. Lol never had a fan b4. Thanx so much.
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May 23, 2012 at 4:18 PM
Awesome piece. I have felt this a lot. Thanks for posting. Always, Laura
Horne Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:32 PM
heartfelt and expressive piece, my friend
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 11:37 AM
reflective, wrenching, soulful with such gracious poetic appeal, ronny....congrats on your recent wins!..:) hugggs!
Loving Iii Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 7:15 PM
you have name two agonies here; both i have experienced.
D. Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 5:34 PM
excellent \
Debrosse Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Excellent composition, enjoyed reading this!
Madonsela Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 12:01 PM
thanx i wrote this nearly 4 yearz ago. Was in a bad place
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