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Alone In My Mind

Have you ever cried?,
Felt your mind go loose 
As you lose sanity.
The people around you
Slowly shrinking until
They vanish into thin air

Silence screaming in your ears
Then solitary you find yourself
Glimpses of you being normal
Pazzling your mind like a math 
test.

An awkward silence after anther
You could berely tell who you 
are.

Have you ever felt a pain so 
deep?,
Your heart drowns in all the 
misery.
Anger consumes you
Then followed by a tantrum
That could last a life time.
All the good memories
Have been reduced to one 
sweet nightmare
Irradiating on what your life 
should have been.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/29/2012 10:00:00 PM
Ronny, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
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Date: 7/26/2012 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Ronny. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:53:00 AM
Ronny a belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/25/2012 1:58:00 PM
Intense... tho very interesting. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
Very dark and very well written poem dealing with emotions many of us can identify with, Ronnie...congratulations - Tim
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Date: 7/25/2012 8:54:00 AM
Outstanding, Ronny. Congrats. Well deserved win. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 7/25/2012 7:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win Ronny
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Date: 7/25/2012 1:54:00 AM
Very nice... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 7/25/2012 12:43:00 AM
Wonderful piece,Ronny.Good job.Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2012 7:42:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:01:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by my work and reading..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2012 4:05:00 AM
Ronny you have a great way with emotion and you word it so sublime. Really good. Shaz
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Date: 5/24/2012 2:53:00 PM
This is a very good poem that I enjoyed reading. We all have these nfeelings at one time or another. Thanks for shari ng. Lucilla
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Date: 5/24/2012 11:13:00 AM
iM UR NEW BIGGEST FAN
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Ronny Madonsela
Date: 5/24/2012 11:53:00 AM
thanx, hey. Lol never had a fan b4. Thanx so much.
Date: 5/23/2012 4:18:00 PM
Awesome piece. I have felt this a lot. Thanks for posting. Always, Laura
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:32:00 PM
heartfelt and expressive piece, my friend
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Date: 5/22/2012 11:37:00 AM
reflective, wrenching, soulful with such gracious poetic appeal, ronny....congrats on your recent wins!..:) hugggs!
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:15:00 PM
you have name two agonies here; both i have experienced.
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Date: 5/21/2012 5:34:00 PM
excellent \
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:26:00 PM
Excellent composition, enjoyed reading this!
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Ronny Madonsela
Date: 5/24/2012 12:01:00 PM
thanx i wrote this nearly 4 yearz ago. Was in a bad place

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