Alone In Fall

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swing alone, heavy branch
golden tone, sneakers scranch

in falling…enhancement 
of sprawling-enchantment

leafing deep, Autumn’s rush
two foot leap, noontime hush

8/17/2021
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Date: 8/17/2024 7:40:00 PM
So cool, Kim. Love it <3
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Date: 8/17/2021 10:56:00 PM
Like the theme you chose, One lovely golden poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 8/17/2021 5:18:00 PM
You penned a wonderful poem, Kim, and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 8/17/2021 5:15:00 PM
This is so lovely, Kim. It's a fave. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/18/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn!
Date: 8/17/2021 10:10:00 AM
I think your poem is better than mine. Best for a win Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 11:57:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
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