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Alone In Fall

swing alone, heavy branch
golden tone, sneakers scranch

in falling…enhancement 
of sprawling-enchantment

leafing deep, Autumn’s rush
two foot leap, noontime hush

8/17/2021
In Essence 2
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Hind Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:40 PM
So cool, Kim. Love it <3
Horsman Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:56 PM
Like the theme you chose, One lovely golden poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Poet Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:18 PM
You penned a wonderful poem, Kim, and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 5:15 PM
This is so lovely, Kim. It's a fave. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:10 AM
I think your poem is better than mine. Best for a win Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Thank you, Victor!
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