Alone In Darkness

I walk
Alone
In darkness

I can't see the ground
Beneath my feet
But there's more stars
Than I've ever seen

There's no one else
To walk with now
No other voice
No other breath
No sound
But soft rustle
Of grass
Under me-
It's all I
Need

At least
Here
I can breathe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mills-Kelly Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 9:10 PM
At least Here I can breathe We all want to be able to breath... that one safe space usually does the trick... Great piece Camron.
Rogers Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 7:27 PM
"I can't see the ground Beneath my feet But there's more stars Than I've ever seen"-The same revelation I had after tormenting myself for over 3 years after my wife left me!-"PROFOUND"!-Love it!!!//Sinclair
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