Alone For Too Long

The twist
The creak
The echo of footsteps
The heartbeat
Heavy
The darkness
The gripling fear
The droplets of water
One
by
One
The noose suspended from the ceiling
The chair beneath it
The step
The fall
The gages
The chokes
The breath rushing out
Then silence
The suicide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Horrible that someone would feel so isolated when there is a friend that careth more than a brother...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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April 4, 2010 at 8:40 AM
The tension and anxiety that lead one to self destruct ring loud and clear in your words, Nasilele. I hope you find some uplifting moments to enjoy Easter Sunday. Best wishes, Carolyn
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