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Alone and All Alone

Alone in my thoughts, I waited on the railway bench Oh, my muddled mind started surveying past, Yes, it was a year ago we sat there sharing hearts On that same bench, her reminiscence all around Grace was her other name, a bubble of infinite grace I heard in her every talk, strains of plaintive music, A girl I adore a lot, an eternal love we promised to share, But my gilded lies failed to die, and in time, my eyes failed to shine. Oh! Is it me or her? Who wants to break away? Beneath the ticking clock Again we met to wrangle. Moment of anger.. And of ego.. At present alone I sat.. A midday sun of misery.. Alone and all alone.. Honorable Mention in STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(4)any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 7/8/2020 8:50:00 AM
Oh my! This is amazingly beautiful and touching, Jenish, that picture brings more sadness as the actor in it is no more..congrats on your HM:)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/8/2020 8:54:00 AM
Yes.. He is Sushant Rajpoot..Unfortunate.. Such a talent decided to leave in a hurry.. Thank you for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/4/2020 7:42:00 AM
Pixie said it best!;) congrats on your win!;)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Brenda..
Date: 7/3/2020 5:44:00 AM
You sure know how to string words together beautifully Jenish. It is no wonder you became a poet. Keep sharing your poetry, it gladdens my heart, Be well xo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Pixie.. I'm delighted reading that comment..
Date: 7/2/2020 11:56:00 PM
Nice imagery of loneliness and regret of love lost. Beautifully rendered. Best wishes in the contest, my friend ~ John
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:30:00 PM
Thank you John for your kind support..
Date: 7/2/2020 7:01:00 PM
I'm wrapping my peanut brain around 'a bubble of infinite grace.' Must be a celestial-type image, as it's beyond this earth-hugger. lol. Thanks, Jenish :) gw
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:30:00 PM
When you are in love, an average girl may become celestial.. lol.. Try yourself.. lol..
Date: 7/2/2020 8:30:00 AM
Well expressed. I can feel this as I read it. Grear poem Jenish :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you Heidi for your kind support..
Date: 7/2/2020 7:39:00 AM
Vivid memories that fill the heart with melancholy but your poetic skill pacifies considerably the pain, dearest Jenish! Blessings
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words..
Date: 7/2/2020 6:43:00 AM
Excellent writing. God bless you
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:28:00 PM
Thank you Gina..
Date: 7/2/2020 6:34:00 AM
A touch of melancholy --you conveyed the emotions wonderfully, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 7/2/2020 5:24:00 AM
with her not alone though alone in departing; why so sad where in self not alone though alone with love; sometime our ego makes us very sensitive and blind about frustration in life and catastrophe comes with very mournful news .....
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/4/2020 11:27:00 PM
True.. ego makes us very sensitive and blind..Thank you Mahtab for your wonderful comment..

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