Alone

I hear sounds 
i see people passing by 
and cars flashing past 
the window 
I am alone 
But not entirely alone 
for in my mind i see 
wave upon wave of memories 
crowding the shore of my reality
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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October 18, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured!! ~Trudy~
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October 17, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Jacqueline! Your poem featured this week is enchanting -a picture of feelings -touching. Congratulations! Keep it up. Your work is invaluable. I want to read more. -Mohammad
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October 16, 2009 at 7:28 PM
This is really good stuff here, Jaqueline...haunting and beautiful! You have painted a true picture of lonliness in this poem...Congrats on it being featured this week! - Tim
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October 12, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patty
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October 12, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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October 12, 2009 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jacqueline. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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October 11, 2009 at 4:47 PM
So much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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