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Alone

I hear sounds i see people passing by and cars flashing past the window I am alone But not entirely alone for in my mind i see wave upon wave of memories crowding the shore of my reality

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Date: 10/18/2009 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on having your wonderful poem featured!! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/17/2009 5:22:00 PM
Jacqueline! Your poem featured this week is enchanting -a picture of feelings -touching. Congratulations! Keep it up. Your work is invaluable. I want to read more. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/16/2009 7:28:00 PM
This is really good stuff here, Jaqueline...haunting and beautiful! You have painted a true picture of lonliness in this poem...Congrats on it being featured this week! - Tim
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/12/2009 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jacqueline. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2009 4:47:00 PM
So much to think about in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen
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