Alone

Right or wrong, stay or go,
i cant remember a time ive felt so low
you wander in, then immediately leave
the emptiness i feel i cant believe

my broken, empty heart, you had saved
but now i see you, cold and depraved,
first chance, second chance, third chance, now four
this is your last chance, dont go out the door

if you do, dont come back dont show your face
i hvae spent my life with your memory trying to erase
but oh the pain and the torment
can someone tell me what it all meant

you've left my life for the last time
so i immortalize our story in this rhyme
ill leave it for all to see
the misery through which you put me

my soul, and endless, black abyss
now solitude alone gives me the bliss
a mask and heart made of stone
please, i beg of you, just leave me alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/10/2016 12:36:00 PM
awesome to read this one again. Chase... LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:03:00 PM
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:55:00 PM
Wow, well expressed. Enjoyed. Linda
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:03:00 PM
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