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Image result for pictures of a rav4 toyota that has been wreckedImage result for pictures of a rav4 toyota that has been wrecked

Neither one of these are exactly like the vehicle but the damage done to the two of them is just slightly more than the damage done to the Toyota Rav4 .

Alone

Alone In the darkness Seeking to find someone Stumbling, searching, groping for help Forlorn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 5:58 PM
oh, my, how did I miss this? Are these from the accident you told us about before? What a horrible thing.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Sara, I can imagine such ordeal and feel for you and ... . YOU, will be all right by HIS MIGHT.
Anish Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:58 AM
What a sad story you ell with this poem. Yes, NYC stands for New York City. It is quite an active place! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Matthew, Thanks for stopping by..I am gradually getting over the accident..I am reminded every time I look out the door or go into town for there is still the orange flags marking where the car went and landed..Also a few flowers and a wreath are out there plus the debris from the wrecked car..We will clean it up when we need to mow the lawn in a few weeks..I am sure that the parents, close family and friends
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:52 PM
continuted...will continue to suffer for a very long time..I feel deeply for them..Sara
Allison Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 4:12 PM
So heartbreaking a scene for anyone to witness and to learn they were not wearing seat belts and lives could possibly have been saved is even more tragic. :-( hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Oh, Sarah ~ how terrible. Was this the scene of the deaths you mentioned in your contest? Your cinquain certainly would be the thought of anyone that would have survived that, even for a few moments. How awful if that happened in your yard.
Lane Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:50 AM
No seatbelts.... sigh. I will write for your contest, Sara. Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Lin, Neither of the vehicles is the one that was in my front yard..However, the damage done to the two of them is just slightly under what was done to that little SUV they were in.. If only they had on their seat belts maybe they would have survived..So young to die so tragically..I have a contest going that you might consider writing a poem to enter..Cinquain only.. Sara
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