Alone

In chain-link of night that beckons trees to crawl stale the wink of stars inked by tears, holding her captive within sweet time’s passage,as his farewell voice chafes a widowed skin; and a body wrought from need of safe refuge denied by rain, pierces curved bones while traces of evening pale follows her gait quite slow as tresses bow, on aisles of candles waning till maiden veil slips on arms, prized keepsake treasured well on anniversary spent alone. 7/12/2015 Contest: Brevity--The Short Of It *less than 100 words

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Date: 7/15/2015 10:37:00 PM
Lovely win, Nette, well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/15/2015 1:45:00 AM
Nette, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:10:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2015 2:50:00 PM
There are delightful 1001 nights in your less 100 words.
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:17:00 PM
Hola, Congs i loved this piece my dear. wowo, owesome Bryan Loves
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:45:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 8:53:00 AM
Very descriptive with an air of sadness. Nicely done :)
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Date: 7/13/2015 7:23:00 AM
A wonderful and excellent write here.......A.M.
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Date: 7/12/2015 5:44:00 PM
what a sad one this is. But so beautifully done.
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Date: 7/12/2015 3:57:00 PM
haunting and despairing Nette powerful pen gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 7/12/2015 1:38:00 PM
You captured the deep grief-pain of a love lost but left the impression of a strong woman, filled with precious memories that provides fuel to continue to live well and when her time comes to meet death with passion and courage! Such is the gift of departing lovers. 7
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Date: 7/12/2015 12:40:00 PM
It is definitely painful to read, but at the same time, there is a certain bitter sweetness about it with how you made the images and this excellent poem stay in my mind!
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Date: 7/12/2015 11:57:00 AM
- A deep and sorrowful poem, dear Nette - I wish you luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/12/2015 10:53:00 AM
Oh Nette great intense imagery and what a sad an ending - great twist to the story good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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