Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

Alone

There I was sitting, left all alone
All was grey, and I was all on my own
I was grey inside as well, nothing new
For me it is normal to be alone, I’m used to

I was starting to wonder: “why is this happening to me?”
But instead I wondered: 
“Why has it taken me long this time to be?!”

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Anastasia Denny March 23, 2015 at 4:43 PM i love this its so true and amzing Mohamed Adel July 13, 2015 at 5:45 AM Thank you,Anastasia, so much for stopping by and glad you liked it :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri March 18, 2015 at 12:01 AM A pensive poem but expresses the lonely heart feel very well in rhyming poetic language. Thumbs up. Do pls coment my latest poem too. Mohamed Adel July 13, 2015 at 5:46 AM Thank you,Zaynub,so much for commenting :)

Skat A March 14, 2015 at 8:07 PM You expressed your poem mighty well, Mohamed... Luv SKAT Mohamed Adel March 14, 2015 at 8:40 PM Thank you, Skat A, so much for stopping by and very glad you enjoyed it :)

Arthur Vaso March 14, 2015 at 3:16 PM Hi Mohamed, great poem, you have expressed this sentiment so well! Mohamed Adel March 14, 2015 at 6:17 PM Thank you, Arthur, so much for your kind words and constant support, i really appreciate your comment and opinion, and very happy you liked it :)