Alone

Vaguely in the dark halls of remembrance I see you dance. 
It is with me forever an ache inside and will always be there. 
Dancing ....... on a high place ...... in a false land. 
  
  
In the dark trees you step high as you dance under a bright moon 
The step lives in me forever trapped in my head and will forever be there. 
Dancing ....... on a high place ...... in a false land.
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Horsch Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 11:00 AM
A beautifully written poem Paddi, And I see that you have a win too. Congrats.....hugs....Roger
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January 1, 2014 at 2:01 PM
- A winning poem Paddi, congratulations!! - Touching and beautifully written - HAPPY NEW YEAR 2014!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
December 28, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,Paddi
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December 27, 2013 at 1:48 AM
Hi Paddi, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox..Linda
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December 13, 2013 at 7:52 PM
Unusual creative writing. I really like this poem, Paddy. Best regards chuck
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