Alone

her passing- - now alone I fumble at daily chores a hummingbird dances above her rose bush
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Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 6:49 PM
This is very lonely! good one Chas [why no give me a contest entry?] Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Nice imagination of introspection, done well my friend. Thanks for your kind visit to my write. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 7:06 PM
this is very moving and a splendid tanka, in my opinion.
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