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Alone

When I feel that someone is there In my heart grows a dreadfull scare People say that they are your friend Some even say, they're there till the end But how is that so, when they do not see Who i am, what makes me really me To me they talk, a day if I am lucky But all it gives me, feelings are lurky Can there be someone who will never leave? Is this something my soul can really believe? If there is, it's not for me Alone forever, I yet will be So the next time that you see my face We might be dead, in another place So i'll take these seconds and hold them dear To lose these memories is my biggest fear I may look tough, strong on the outside But I can be soft, loving on the inside For me and you, let time pursue Since if we wait, our love is true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/22/2013 8:26:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and kind words. You write beautifully.
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:53:00 PM
What a fascinating write..."Alone forever, I yet will be" wow, that is a powerful line, I really enjoyed the whole poem that you have written! I think the best stanza is the second to the last one! The one that starts, "so i'll take these seconds and hold them dear..." Those 4 lines are truly phenomenal! This is a wonderful poem Jordan, Great Work!!
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 9/20/2012 10:02:00 PM
Thank you Russell I am really glad when someone appreciates what I feel Thanks

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