Alone

transfixed
                  by silence
                  quietness
surrounds
encompasses
                       thoughts
on
hold
            waiting
                  patiently
in
a
            vacuum
tedium
at
                    bay
                    ideas
gestate
germinate
                  slowly
synthesise
into
              verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Yep! The subject calls for herky-jerky form. Love it. Congrats, daver
King Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 9:22 PM
reminds me of e.e. cummings, man....cool poetic style indeed!
A   Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Good morning, Brian cool, have yourself a lovely day~ALWAYS *PD
Irisha Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Very nice.
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