Alone

As I sit cross the room,
Staring at our love die. 
Seeing you leave outta my life, 
makes me cry. 
My emotions is shot, falling into the 
sea, 
I didn't know how you really felt 
about me.

Heart is broken in two, and You 
don't seem not to care.
I thought you wanted to have a life 
that we both can share. 
Lay down all my feelings on the 
table....To show you what I see. 
Every second of every day....I pray 
to let our love be.

Is the end of What we had, Is this 
how you feel?
To be honest, I still love you. But in 
the back of my mind..I can't seem to 
deal.
 In time...My heart will start to heal!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/5/2014 1:21:00 AM
Hi,Shermaine very strong emotional piece. Very deep!
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Date: 3/23/2012 6:59:00 AM
I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Shermaine. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:05:00 AM
i enjoyed reading this and i also welcome you to poetrysoup.it a fun place to share your poems and other stuff..hope to be seeing much of you
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Date: 3/12/2012 5:24:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shermaine. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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