Alone

Alone am I and don't want to be, I pray for someone to come and rescue me. I 
wander along this lonely path and think of those that I've lost in the past.

I seek for someone to walk with me, I look and entreat, for my soul is in despair. 
Once I had a mate so fair and refined, she walked with me and soothed my mind, 
but now she is gone.  My world has become calamity. Now I wander this lonely path, 
across mountains and through the pass. In desert places my soul does thirst for an 
oasis to drink from on this lonely earth.

I despise the day and rue the night, when dreams come in and stress my plight. The 
sun does scorch me, the cold sends shivers down my spine. No one to shade me, no 
one to hold me, nothing to make the cold to flee.

My heart is weary and my mind whispers, your name is solo and will always be. My 
shadow mocks me as I go, a reminder of long ago, when there were other shadows 
not just mine alone. I've become a mad man, I curse the day and wail at night. 
Perhaps some day I'll find sweet rest, join the ones I lost in the past and solo no 
longer my name will be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/18/2011 9:16:00 AM
What a powerful write, Jack - and I see it was very deservedly featured too
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:26:00 PM
Thank you sir Jack my friend for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...your friend old Jack
Date: 8/23/2011 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jack Jr. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:42:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Carol for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack...thanks for the congratulations, I am pleased about it but not so sure it's deserving.
Date: 8/21/2011 11:24:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share with luv..
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:12:00 AM
Thank you so very much lovely Lady Linda, much appreciated...old Jack
Date: 8/4/2011 8:44:00 AM
sweet.....
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much lovely lady for you kind comments, very much appreciated.....with love...old Jack
Date: 7/16/2011 8:01:00 PM
I kno the feel of the lonesome wheel, when it only turns 4 you :) seek and you will find fresher deals, look till she comes, your heart it feels, so bright n new. never stop looking mate! Don
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:52:00 AM
Thanks mate appreciate your kind comments....with love....old Jack
Date: 7/11/2011 11:29:00 PM
Very beautiyful..
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Date: 8/4/2011 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much lovely Lady for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
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