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Alone

Alone. Silence fills the lonely particles that surround me. The whispers of the wind fill the void of the fallow surroundings. I call out to you, you push me away. I stand here with my arms empty. I call for the comforts of a friend. But you are not there. One of the only true friends that I desperately needed, is no longer wanting me. But I pretend not to care; I put on my fake smile hoping that one day it will become real. But the way things are now, my heart is shattered, my happiness destroyed. You continue to be happy without me, as I am left in the dark to try and fend for myself. The hurtful company of lonely voices call out to me, so I silently accept its sweet embrace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/10/2011 6:30:00 PM
ive felt this alone feeling a lot
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:54:00 AM
im just like you. every1 push me away ty hope u go far with poetry
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Date: 3/8/2011 7:33:00 AM
i love how this poem goes into a story but i want to know more about it and i love how u asked for a hug and ur hands stood empty but at the end you accepted the sweet voices that call out to u
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Amanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too..good luck with luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:00:00 PM
hurtful it is till the sun shines on that paticular flower for us to pick, sometimes our own company is all we can count on, you'll get back up and see you don't need their sholder to lean on, deep write Amanda,..p.d.
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:50:00 PM
We all go through this at time in life ..it makes stronger and who we are... for the better you will see.....Michael
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