Alone

All my life throughout all my days
I walk threw it as a complex maze
There’s never a right turn
Every way I go I never learn
Nobody cares, I’m all alone
As sad a dog without a bone
Where do I go does anyone care
The feelings I have gradually start to tare
Help me god, I feel so alone
Me, myself and I is the only thing I have known
If you are listening, I need a hand
Help me, everywhere I go I feel banned
Take me, show me love
The closest thing I know is so far above
The guidance I once knew 
Was like the wind that blew
So current so strong
Now it’s gone
If you truly care
Do you think this is fair
I’m all by myself trying not to cry
The word at the tip of my tongue is the question why
Love me show me an ounce of care
My world would change that is fair
A little love could change it all
Stop me from this trail I’m on before I fall
Pick me up, take me home
Show me what life is for I have never truly known
Your love will change me, I will never take a wrong turn 
All it took was love, someone who cared for me to learn
Life isn’t bad with support and love
God knows, in heaven above
You have saved me
You let me be 
Set me free 
Gave me something I have never known
The feeling of not having to be alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/18/2010 2:16:00 AM
nice work.you have beautifully brought here the feeling of loneliness.continue this awesome work.
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Date: 6/6/2010 12:26:00 PM
sad write, . p.d.
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