alone

when you feel isolated don’t burden someone with the unwavering thought of loneliness don’t ruin a persons peace for your own comfort when you get to know a person deeper don’t make a game of it when they get comfortable you’re quick to leave all you needed was someone to talk to not stay with don’t trick someone into forever when you know you don’t have that long

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James Peranteau

Date: 6/4/2025 8:07:00 PM

well, sit down girl, i'm 'bout tuh speak... ') advice...you'll hear many uv them, trust me, even when your 50...hear them all, az you grow, you'll know advice suitable for yourself...and no one should ever expect you to accept it. Now; if you read all uv my writes hear, you'll at thuh least know, i am infatuated with love. Listen; stop caring about other people'z think about you! Finish school, werk hard, 'buy' your own car and home...then start caring whut others think about you, cauze you'll have, and to have, well, it naturally brings pleasure and you'll glow, and when you glow, wow, only those who see your heart will want to court you...oh....bumz are looooooserz...don't believe thoze romance movies uv true love with bumz and princesses...lol...don't....much love...p.s...you got's writing skillz...I read all uv your writes, look'n forward to watch you grow az thuh writer ,)

James Peranteau
Date: 6/5/2025 5:31:00 AM

') fill them with happiness tessa, that's whut pneuma want when they read poetry...and i can feel ya got it in ya...enjoy your summer lady....much love

Tessa Yearwood
Date: 6/5/2025 5:02:00 AM

thank you for the feedback! and i do hope to publish poetry books one day soon.