Alone

Alone 
In a graveyard
By a tombstone
Where I should be
Unfortunately 
For me
I survived the black sea
Life is the trophy
Causing my misery
I wanted to leave
Earth at birth
I was supposed to
I was six weeks early
Why can’t I leave now queen bee?
Please answer me
I’m stuck here unwillingly
Its hurting me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mccallum Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 12:51 AM
Beautiful poem Steve. Very unique in the sense that it dosen't follow a regular rule of poetry. Thanks for your feedback on recent release. Keep up the good work. Jordan.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 9:27 AM
It's not so much the quality of life but what you do with the life you are given. The larger the mountain, the greater the accomplishment. Keep climbing. Vince
Loveless Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 9:47 PM
wow thats extreme!
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2009 at 11:22 AM
I do not undersatnd why you don't want to be here. I know heaven is going to be beautiful but God put us here because he had things he wanted us to do. He is not going to let you leave until you have done them. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Dark writings Steve, nicely written>>James
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