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Alone

Loneliness has many forms, My loneliness is, like a flickering candle, in an empty home, When I open the windows, and try to gaze you in dark starry nights, the mild gust of wind, almost blows off my feeble kindle, reminding me of my meaningless presence. My candle is melting away, my tears keep on freezing at the base, In my solitude no one cares, whether me or my feelings are slowly vanishing away. Then one day you appear from nowhere, you shield the glow of my feeble candle, the candle burns steadily with radiance, my heart beams with joy and glee. When I was daydreaming of love and romance, you suddenly disappear forever, my candle is full of fear and insecure, as the winds of life may finally blow it off for good.

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Date: 7/22/2023 9:56:00 PM
Gee, Thanks. You are the only person who read all my poems. I appreciate that and hope you liked them.
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Date: 7/22/2023 3:17:00 AM
That's the good thing about life there is always something unexpected around the corner. Never give up hope. Your poem is sad Jay, but you are such a nice man. if your words were real and not fiction, there is bound to be someone waiting.. just around the corner.. Best wishes SV
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