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Alone

You know those dudes you think are cool Those guys that get kicked out of school They go about life day by day And never have a place to stay Some are beatin some are abused Tomorrow they'll be on the news Child missing fifteen years old One week later the case goes cold They never had kids or a wife And didn't get to live their life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/31/2009 12:14:00 PM
kody i was there when you was makin this masterpiece nice job
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:13:00 PM
dude kody thats effin awesome i didnt know you can right yo man hit up some of my stuff
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:13:00 PM
Amazing work Kody, this poem speaks volumes. There is so much compacted into this couplet. Great work...Raul
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:19:00 PM
Very sad but true feeling you have here! Thought provoking! Laura :)
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:35:00 PM
wow! I canreally say I've never been in that type of situation but after reading this it felt like my life story
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:12:00 PM
A lot of sad truth in your poem about the "dudes you think are cool." There are often problems related to abuse in their past. Well stated, Kody!
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