Kody Oberhauser Poet Couplet

Alone

You know those dudes you think are cool
Those guys that get kicked out of school

They go about life day by day
And never have a place to stay

Some are beatin some are abused
Tomorrow they'll be on the news

Child missing fifteen years old
One week later the case goes cold

They never had kids or a wife
And didn't get to live their life

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Chris Yarnell March 31, 2009 at 12:14 PM kody i was there when you was makin this masterpiece nice job

Raul Moreno March 31, 2009 at 12:13 PM Amazing work Kody, this poem speaks volumes. There is so much compacted into this couplet. Great work...Raul

Jade Exit March 31, 2009 at 12:13 PM dude kody thats effin awesome i didnt know you can right yo man hit up some of my stuff

Laura Mckenzie March 30, 2009 at 6:19 PM Very sad but true feeling you have here! Thought provoking! Laura :)

Kesha Mashaw March 30, 2009 at 5:35 PM wow! I canreally say I've never been in that type of situation but after reading this it felt like my life story

Carolyn Devonshire March 30, 2009 at 4:12 PM A lot of sad truth in your poem about the "dudes you think are cool." There are often problems related to abuse in their past. Well stated, Kody!