Alone

When the night was dark with a storm blowing wild
Why did you blow out the little flickering lamp of my life
Didnt you hear the pitiful wailing of the helpless infant
Abandoned by you, Oh! Mother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kapoor Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 8:45 AM
After every dark night there is Hope for a dawn. Try to drift more towards Hope and do not worry even if there darkness all-around. You have the potentials to write good poetry. Keep it up and make it more optimistic. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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September 11, 2009 at 3:02 AM
POWERFUL TOT!
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