Alone

Alone by a stream skipping stones aimlessly No, that's too trite --randomly, perhaps What's the use of pretending that it's meaningful

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 6:36:00 AM

A chore for thought-time. There's meaning in them after all.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2020 1:36:00 PM

Perhaps many of us struggle to find meaning in our daily activities, Gershon. And finding the right word choice can be elusive. Random or aimless, the stones still skip over the stream. Compelling thoughts, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/14/2020 2:37:00 PM

Thank you for you in-depth comments on this and my other writes. I just love reading what you have to say. 'Keep those cards and letters coming, Carolyn. Thanks again, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 1/14/2020 9:28:00 AM

Loved this and aimlessly? That is what skipping stones is all about, at least to me. So why do we skip stones...because we can. : )

Chris Green
Date: 1/14/2020 1:28:00 PM

Ummm...something like that. : )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/14/2020 11:39:00 AM

I'm so stoned, I skipped your comment. What was that now, Chris?! ~ Aimless AND Clueless

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/13/2020 11:37:00 PM

lol.. aimlessly searching for your creative muse.. Good one..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/14/2020 11:37:00 AM

Watch out if I ever learn how to aim my confounded pen! LOL. Thanks, Jenish. :) gw