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Alone

Alone   Alone I sit I wait I contemplate   Alone I am I am not I am here I am not   Alone But surrounded Without peace Forgotten yet not   Alone In a city of millions In a world of many In my thoughts Though not in my feelings   Alone

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Date: 1/29/2019 2:48:00 PM
The last six lines are a complete poem without the rest of it, but the rest of it gives it a sweet build up, so nicely done!
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Alunamda Yokwe
Date: 1/29/2019 5:11:00 PM
This is one of the first few I penned last year and I can honestly say I haven't noticed that before! I think. It actually makes for more powerful poem that way. Thanks for the perspective and the advice. Much appreciated.

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