Aloha Robert Kekaula

A church rat ran under our pew
Our Vicar caught it impromptu
Though some found it odd
The Vicar thanked God
For adding fresh meat to the stew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Laurie Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Hello Rico … we call our meat pies mystery bags here. The most dangerous place for a rat to reside is in a bakery - well written Rico - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Ewwww! Can't say much for the cuisine, but this is a good limerick! Janice
Wolf Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 5:51 PM
The days of 'Rats, Spoiled Again,' must be over! Yippee! ~ Days of Wine and Noses
Bauer Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 4:15 PM
yuck! very funny, rico, but still yuck!
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:52 AM
ha ha ha:-) heaven sent indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:14 AM
Waste not want not lol
Leffanta Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:33 AM
One's stomach does not care providing it is nourishing! But one's mind would prefer not to know heads nor tails.....
Hankins Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Oh, my. A marvelous limerick, if a bit gross! I think I would not have joined the congregation for lunch that day.
Leffanta Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank Norway for large rats which may have nourished your ancestors!
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