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Aloha Robert Kekaula

A church rat ran under our pew Our Vicar caught it impromptu Though some found it odd The Vicar thanked God For adding fresh meat to the stew

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Date: 6/24/2021 6:15:00 PM

Hello Rico … we call our meat pies mystery bags here. The most dangerous place for a rat to reside is in a bakery - well written Rico - Lindsay

Date: 6/21/2021 4:26:00 PM

Ewwww! Can't say much for the cuisine, but this is a good limerick! Janice

Date: 6/20/2021 5:51:00 PM

The days of 'Rats, Spoiled Again,' must be over! Yippee! ~ Days of Wine and Noses

Date: 6/20/2021 4:15:00 PM

yuck! very funny, rico, but still yuck!

Date: 6/20/2021 11:52:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) heaven sent indeed:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 6/20/2021 11:14:00 AM

Waste not want not lol

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/20/2021 11:33:00 AM

One's stomach does not care providing it is nourishing! But one's mind would prefer not to know heads nor tails.....

Date: 6/20/2021 11:13:00 AM

Oh, my. A marvelous limerick, if a bit gross! I think I would not have joined the congregation for lunch that day.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/20/2021 11:31:00 AM

Thank Norway for large rats which may have nourished your ancestors!